xanthan gum

it was very creative and clever, and i loved the point of view it was told from most of all. for some odd reason, though, i didn't like it as ...

this is very forlorn. i sort of liked it. i loved the ending of the last stanza the most, and the second stanza was "ehhhh". but the first wasn't bad ...

beautiful. really. constructive critizism. in fact, us poets' should all learn a bit from you to write about the more simple things in life. :D i don't even LIKE oranges!

i loved it, but i don't think it really showed "maturity", nor "immaturity"...not really. I didn't really get any level of maturity about it - i didn't...er...think it was ABOUT ...

the last line in the second stanza and the last line in the third stanza (sorry, i didn't know how to grammatically combine those two) are a bit off with ...

this is a very cute poem - i just have minor suggestion: could you slip in some words with the last two lines - the rhythm feels off from itself ...

i, also, had to read this a couple of times, but it definitely made me think. the title really hooked me and my favorite stanza was as follows: Wasted days ...

i loved this poem, but the repetition of "she was born in august" didn't have much as effect as it was meant to have because he poem was so short. ...

i agree with everyone else. it was amazing, as such your poetry tends to be, but the ending sort of ruined the whole poem. no, actually it didn't. i just...didn't ...

I applaud this. it was beautiful. the title was very...er...wity (sorry for all spelling mistakes - i've misplaced my backspace key) i loved the images and the last line was ...

though short, this poem rang with experience and skill. i loved the vocabulary adn the images. (sorry for all misspelling here forward - i seem to be missing a backspace ...

well, i definitely undestand that you had strong flow of emotions when you wrote this, but usually when we are in our rapture our poetry is not always our best. ...

well, yeah, this doesn't fit. i mean, it has a good meaning and all, but you didn't develop it well, nor did you use many poetic references. it didn't have ...

That.was.beautiful. I loved this poem - the images and the way you descriped your feelings, the way they ran so equally with mine and everyone else's was perfect. I've always ...

this was a relatively good poem. i found nothing amazing or outstanding about it, and i must mention that the one line, "All turns to golden glass," reminded me of ...